Internet or Not?!

Living in the 21th(ww. - 21st century) expoes(sp.) you to some of the greatest inventions humanity has ever known - The internet. Over the years, since 1960, when the Internet was intrepidity(phr.) in the American military, it has became(gr.) the most influential and ground breaking invention of the last century. Recently, there have been opinions claiming that this wonderful creation is worthless.

On the one hand, the internet allows you to combine business in your private life. For instance, the E-mail, gives you the possibility to communicate with your clients when you are not in your office. In addition, the internet is known by the humanity(ww.) as the largest libary we have ever known. Every tiny piece of material is available in(ww. - on) the internet, what(ww. - which) makes the internet what makes it(מיותר) the perfect place for you to broden your horizones.

On the other hand, there has been (a) suggestion that in a few years, students will not study in classes. They will use chat videos - a cutting edge technology which enable(gr.) a student to speak directly with other students or teachers while seeing them. It simulates an actual conversation without the need to be in a(ww. - the) same room. It is important to remember that replacing teachers with computers necessarily means limited options (in) terms of teaching modes. This is to say, computers can not modify the teaching process to fit the student.

In conclusion, using cutting edge technology like(the) internet is a wondefull thing. However, it is important to know when to stop using it. In my opinion, It is fine and even necessary to use new technologies at(ww.) this century, but we have to be aware to(ww.-of) virtual dangers. That is to say, I suggest limited hours in a day for usuing the internet(phr.).

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