Sport Or Not?

Two days ago, while I was reading this magazine, I read an article and as a part of the article the writer asked the readers to express their opinion on the issue which some people prefer team sports while other prefer individual sports.(phr.) I personally think that team sport is preferable in this case.

On the one hand, it is important to mention that team sports develop different kinds of abilities, such as team work, since the players have to work in cooperation, (pay) attention to the whole team because during a game, some players use to mistake(phr.). For example, in a football match, the striker tends to loose the ball as a result of stress. So, as a player in his team, my duty is to keep the ball away from the opponent.

On the other hand, individual sports develop a lot of skills, which team sport does not. for example, the issue of self discipline does not appear in team sports such as football and basketball. In addition, there is the fact that in the individual sports, each game is important for the players' respect(ww.) - The more you win , you are a better player(phr.).
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To conclude, you can see that it is not about a better kind of sport, it is all dependent(phr.) on what kind of player you are. For example, you can be the greatest soccer player in the history of sport. But as long as you can not work in a team, you are worthless compared to a middeled(ww.) player who works (well) in a team work.

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Daphna

Why don't you correct your work?