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Internet or Not?!

Living in the 21th(ww. - 21st century) expoes(sp.) you to some of the greatest inventions humanity has ever known - The internet. Over the years, since 1960, when the Internet was intrepidity(phr.) in the American military, it has became(gr.) the most influential and ground breaking invention of the last century. Recently, there have been opinions claiming that this wonderful creation is worthless.

On the one hand, the internet allows you to combine business in your private life. For instance, the E-mail, gives you the possibility to communicate with your clients when you are not in your office. In addition, the internet is known by the humanity(ww.) as the largest libary we have ever known. Every tiny piece of material is available in(ww. - on) the internet, what(ww. - which) makes the internet what makes it(מיותר) the perfect place for you to broden your horizones.

On the other hand, there has been (a) suggestion that in a few years, students will not study in classes. They will use chat videos - a cutting edge technology which enable(gr.) a student to speak directly with other students or teachers while seeing them. It simulates an actual conversation without the need to be in a(ww. - the) same room. It is important to remember that replacing teachers with computers necessarily means limited options (in) terms of teaching modes. This is to say, computers can not modify the teaching process to fit the student.

In conclusion, using cutting edge technology like(the) internet is a wondefull thing. However, it is important to know when to stop using it. In my opinion, It is fine and even necessary to use new technologies at(ww.) this century, but we have to be aware to(ww.-of) virtual dangers. That is to say, I suggest limited hours in a day for usuing the internet(phr.).

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Bagrut exams

For the past few years the issue of Matriculation exams are(ww. - as) the most reliable way of testing a student's knowledge, has been debated in many levels, such as teachers and students. Recently, there have been opinions claiming that this way of testing is worthless. I personally believe that the Bagrut exams are not the most effective way of testing students.

First of all, there is the most known argument, which simply claims that the Bagrut exams "stresses out" the student. This leads them to mistake(phr.) during the test. There is no proven claim that the Matriculation exams make students to get into panics(phr.), although, most of the pupils that have just finished the exam claims(gr.) the test was very stressful among others of(phr.) the material they have to study and the time they (have) to accomplish that.

Second of all, most of the teachers tend to say that the Bagrut exams are the most reliable way of testing a student's knowledge. This, in my opinion, is wrong, since the student is demanded(ww. - required) to remember 200 pages for 3 hours of testing, (which) is really ridiculous. A research that was published in Ynet showed that after a period of time after the test, in other words(מיותר) one and a half week(s) after the test, most of the students do not remember most of the material they learned.

To conclude, I suggest the education system to find a different way to examine the students' knowledge. A kind of test that will test the students not only theoretically, but practicaly as well. This will help the students to remember the material for a long period of time.

Better.

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Daphna

Sport Or Not?

Two days ago, while I was reading this magazine, I read an article and as a part of the article the writer asked the readers to express their opinion on the issue which some people prefer team sports while other prefer individual sports.(phr.) I personally think that team sport is preferable in this case.

On the one hand, it is important to mention that team sports develop different kinds of abilities, such as team work, since the players have to work in cooperation, (pay) attention to the whole team because during a game, some players use to mistake(phr.). For example, in a football match, the striker tends to loose the ball as a result of stress. So, as a player in his team, my duty is to keep the ball away from the opponent.

On the other hand, individual sports develop a lot of skills, which team sport does not. for example, the issue of self discipline does not appear in team sports such as football and basketball. In addition, there is the fact that in the individual sports, each game is important for the players' respect(ww.) - The more you win , you are a better player(phr.).
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To conclude, you can see that it is not about a better kind of sport, it is all dependent(phr.) on what kind of player you are. For example, you can be the greatest soccer player in the history of sport. But as long as you can not work in a team, you are worthless compared to a middeled(ww.) player who works (well) in a team work.

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Why don't you correct your work?

3 Bar Ilan st.
Holon
24 April, 2010



Yale University
5 liana Street
New York
USA

Dear Sir / Madam,

I am writing this letter since I am interested in applying to your university. More specifically, I am interested in your music program called "Music for all".

I would like to study voice training and to become a part of your exiting Philharmonic orchestra. I understand Yale has an excellent course in "Broadway performance". Although, this is a important program I believe I will fit in and benefit from it.

I am currently studying at Kugel High School and I will be completing my studies in about two years. On top of being an excellent student, I have been a musician for most of my life. I play the guitar and I have performed in a Musical high school version of "Hamlet". I am confident that being a part of your music program will contribute to my musical education.

I will be grateful if you can send me more information about your program as well as additional details such as fees, duration of the program and any other relevant information. Thank you for you assistance. Looking forward to hearing from you.

King regards,
Mario Luigie.

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Daphna

See the World

3 Bar Ilan Street

Holon
April 16, 2010

Ms. Lola Berry
Manager
"See the World"
6 Bobo Street
New York, NY

Dear Ms. Berry,

My name is Mario Luigy, I am 17 years old and I am currently studying at Kugel High School. I am writing this letter since I am deeply intrested in the idea of a trip to the US. I used to guide groups as part of my volunteer work. Furthemore, I had the opportunity to be part of a pioneer project called "Taglit", where I was a guide. Therefore, a trip with "See The World" would truely be a wonderful opportunity for me.

In a case where I will be accepted to your tour to the US I would be intrested in visiting The White House, The Washington Monument and Capitol Hill. As you can see, I am inrested in a politaclly - orriented type of tour.

Nonetheless, High costs and expences might impair my efforts to join the tour. As a result, I would greatly appreciate information about hotels' costs, travel expencese and other general fees involved.

I am running out of time so I hope to hear from you as early as you can. Moreover, I would like you to know that I am looking forward to my Trip.

Kind Regards,
Mario Luigy

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Daphna

3 Bar Ilan Street

Holon

July 2, 2006

Station manager Office

1 Mota Gor Street
Holon

Dear Sir / Madam,

I have heard your radio station plans to produce a series of one-hour programs for teenagers. You have asked teenage listeners to send in their suggestions so I would like to suggest my idea for a program.

If you are wondering why my program should be realized on your radio station, I am sure you will be surprised to know that, as a teenager, I understand what the teenagers want to hear and learn. First of all, my program will focused on teenagers' problems. Problems we face almost every single day, such as arguments with the parents, problems with the boyfriend and the girlfriend and the biggest problem we face, which is Love. Second of all, I will dedicate 15 minutes in every program to homework problems. The listeners will actually be able to make a phone call to the radio station and ask their question and by the program I will try to help them.

There are plenty of reasons why the subject of my program is important and why other teens would be interested. For instance, all the teenagers have similar problems, so after helping some of the teenagers, I will know for sure what will help them. Furthermore, I know for sure how to deal with love problems. I have experienced many disappointments, so I know the answer to every little problem they will ask me.

To conclude, I hope you take my suggestion under consideration. I believe my program will help the teenagers all over the country and I am sure the program will be a hit on your radio station.

I want to thank you for considering my suggestion.

Sincerely yours,
Mario Luiejy.
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Daphna

Gadna Week

A few weeks ago, eleventh graders in my school came back from the Gadna Week. It took place at Sde Boker, in the south of Israel. The Gadna Week simply prepares seventeen year old teenagers for their military service. In a general look, I truly enjoyed the preparation for the IDF and this experience was unforgettable.

Our Gadna week was divided into four parts, which included team work, chores, training and classes in military theories. Nevertheless, they all had several things in common, such as keeping times. Generally speaking, keeping to a tight schedule allows one to be organized. It also helped me feel in control, since I knew exactly what to expect. For example, breakfast was at 6:30 am, lunch was at 12:30 pm etc. Another exciting, but rigorous, feature of army life was the training. I liked the challenging training because it helped me understand what is expected of me in the army. For example, doing well in the physical training part proved to me that I could do well in the Infantry Corps.

Yet, the unique army experience includes getting used to army hierarchy. Through the Gadna week, every team had a tough commander who told them what to do in every situation. This made me feel small and powerless. As a "soldier", I felt like an insignificant, helpless and superfluous part in a much larger system. This was because I felt like I could not resist them.

To conclude, the experience as a whole is recommended and worthwhile. The Gadna helps us understand the significance of the IDF and the importance of everybody's contribution to it.

Excellent! (and nice picture!).

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Daphna

UK Travel Agency

3 Bar Ilan Street
Holon
July 2, 2006

Manager's Office
UK Travel Agency
1 Mota Gor Street
Holon

Dear Sir / Madam,

It has been a tradition in my family to go on a vacation every summer. This summer, two weeks ago, I took part in an organized tour on my last vacation. I expected to have a graet time but instead, I was disappointed. I wish to complain about the vacation you had recommended and the misleading information we got.


First of all, I would like to express my disappointment from the hotel you have chosen. The service was bad, the meals were unsatisfactory and the rooms were dirty. In addition, our articles were stolen while we were at the small swimming pool. It can be said that your hotel was not as good as what you led me to believe.

Second of all, I would like to express the opposition I feel about the guide we got. He was very impatienced and moody. For example, whenever my sister asked him a question about the sites we saw, he got upset and started yelling on my sister. Furthemore, I could notice that his explanations were not comprehensible although he tried to interest us.


To conclude, I sincerely hope that you will take action to correct the issue. I hope that you will change the information in your website inspite of renovate that hotel, an action that will cost a lot of money to execute since a new pool, the materials etc, cost a lot of money together. As a result of this case, I would appreciarte a refund.

I look foward to your reply.

Sincerely yours,

Mario Luiejy.

Please correct your work!

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Daphna

Cyber Angels Organization

15 Tzvi Frank Street
Rishon Le Zion
March 4, 2010

The Manager's Office
Cyber Angels Organization
41 Seaview Street
Netanya

Dear Sir/Madam,

I would like to join your voluntary organization called "Cyber Angel". In our digital age, it's becoming incredibly common. Many people all around the world have been victims of cyber crimes, such as stalking people in the chat rooms. Like you, I want to fight those crimes and make sure the victims are safe.

If you wonder why I believe that I am suitable for "Cyber Angels" I am sure you will be surprised to know that I have been a victim of the criminals that we are talking about. They keep on bother and harass me. Inspite of give up to those criminals, I found out about the Cyber Angels organization and I am glad you helped me.

I believe that I can contribute to the organization because of my experience in computers. I like to spend my free time on the computer.I had five points in computers Bagrut Exam. Furthermore, I spend a lot of time on the computer and I know many things on this subject.


In my opinion, the goal of the organization is very important and the problem of this harassment on the internet is a very important issue. Therefore, I would like to do the best I can to help in the attempt to stop this phenomenon.


I hope to hear from you soon,

Sincerely yours,

Mario Kuba.

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Daphna

Virtual Classes

For the past few mounths the issue of virtual classes has been debated in many levels, such as teachers, parents and students. In this new way of studying, students have the opportunity to learn the material from the internet, instead of the traditional frontal lessons of learning in the class. Recently there have been opinions claiming that this new way of studying is worthless.

On the one hand, learning through the internet gives the student an opportunity to learn at his own personal pace, since most of the learning is done by the students with the teacher's guide. This improves the student's ability to understand the material more effectively. Furthemore, if the pupil does not understand some of the reading material, he can write an e-mail to his teacher and ask for help.

On the other hand, the virtual classes make the most important objectives provided by school's student - social meetings. At school, the pupils learn how to contact others but sitting in front of the computer all day long harms the student since this way the student does not develop any social skills.
In addition, this new program has economic problems. There are many families who do not have a computer. They will have to buy a computer that costs a lot of money in order for their children to study.

To conclude, I believe this new form of learning is very unique and special since it has never been tried before. However, I think that this new way of studying should not replace the old and good way of studying which includes learning with other students in the same room with a real teacher.




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