Food Manufacturers

For the past few years, nutritionists like Alice Brown has been claimed(gr.) that people need to be more responsible for what they eat and to eat more healthy food, such as vegetables and vitamin supplements. Alice Brown sais(sp.) that there is a definited(gr.) connection between people's behavior and what they eat or don't eat. This leads us to the question, whether food manufacturers sould(sp.) be held responsible for producing healthier food, or not.

First, I personaly think that manufacturers sould(sp.) not be held responsible for producing healthier food since the food that the manufacturers producing(gr.) is legal and they have the right to produce this food. Furthemore, avoiding(ww.) the manufacturers from producing their food can leads(gr.) to an aconimical(sp.) problems(gr.) and social problems as well, such as separation the social(phr.) into two classes and more.

Furthermore, People have the right to choose what to eat. The fact that there are people that should eat more healthy food, such as vegetables and vitamins, can't avoid us(phr.), the other consumers, to eat and buy the food we like to eat. In other words, I believe that people that want to eat healty(sp.) food sould(sp.) buy a(מיותר) special food for them and sould(sp.) not abstain(ww.) us from having variety of food(phr.).

In conclusion, I believe that blamming the food manufacturers for producing (a) selection of food(s), that includes unhealthy food is wrong and not necessary. In addition, I suggest that all the people that want to eat healty food sould(sp.) have a special schedule(what?) that includes the food they can eat from the tremendous food selection.

You have quite a lot to correct. Please read my remarks and correct your work accordingly.
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Daphna