Marley & Me

I have recently read a book called "Marley and Me: Life and Love with the World's Worst Dog". This book is a New York Times bestselling autobiographical book by journalist John Grogan, that was published in 2005. generally, I really love this book for the reasons it is funny(phr.) and this is a must-read for anyone who has ever loved a pet. Marley & Me, however, is for more than pet people. I recommend it for anyone who enjoys a good story.

John and Jenny Grogan, a new caple(sp.) that(מיותר) (had) just moved from the brutal Michigan winters and relocate(gr. - use the past) to a cottage in southern Florida, where they are hired as reporters for competing newspapers. At The Palm Beach Post, Jenny immediately receives prominent front-page assignments, while at the South Florida Sun Sentinel, John finds himself writing obituaries and two-paragraph articles about mundane news, like a fire at the local garbage dump. John's friend advises him to adopet a dog to see if they're ready to raise a family. Than(sp.) came Marley. Marley is a yellow Labrador Retriever. Marley, a wiggly yellow furball of a puppy who immediately proves to be incorrigible. They bring him to Ms. Kornblut, who firmly believes any dog can be trained, but when Marley refuses to obey commands, she expels him from her class. Marley continues to wreak havoc on the household, providing John with a wealth of material for his column, which becomes a hit with readers and helps increase the newspaper's circulation. Jenny becomes pregnant, but loses the baby early in her first trimester.- This very long paragraph has to be divided into two seperate paragraphs.

In my opinion this book is an amazing book that, as I said, every(ww. - any) one who loves pet(s) should read. So Yes, there are plenty of dog stories or pet sroties if you want to read, and yes, Grogan contends that there is a lot we can learn from our pets. The story is, however, so honest and well-written that I believe it will resonate with pet lovers and pet-deprived people alike.

Clearly, you haven't used you own words and style for the most part of this essay, and that's too bad. it is your writing that I want to read. It's fine to look for help in various sources of information, but using it throughout your whole essay is not right.

Daphna

Food Manufacturers

For the past few years, nutritionists like Alice Brown has been claimed(gr.) that people need to be more responsible for what they eat and to eat more healthy food, such as vegetables and vitamin supplements. Alice Brown sais(sp.) that there is a definited(gr.) connection between people's behavior and what they eat or don't eat. This leads us to the question, whether food manufacturers sould(sp.) be held responsible for producing healthier food, or not.

First, I personaly think that manufacturers sould(sp.) not be held responsible for producing healthier food since the food that the manufacturers producing(gr.) is legal and they have the right to produce this food. Furthemore, avoiding(ww.) the manufacturers from producing their food can leads(gr.) to an aconimical(sp.) problems(gr.) and social problems as well, such as separation the social(phr.) into two classes and more.

Furthermore, People have the right to choose what to eat. The fact that there are people that should eat more healthy food, such as vegetables and vitamins, can't avoid us(phr.), the other consumers, to eat and buy the food we like to eat. In other words, I believe that people that want to eat healty(sp.) food sould(sp.) buy a(מיותר) special food for them and sould(sp.) not abstain(ww.) us from having variety of food(phr.).

In conclusion, I believe that blamming the food manufacturers for producing (a) selection of food(s), that includes unhealthy food is wrong and not necessary. In addition, I suggest that all the people that want to eat healty food sould(sp.) have a special schedule(what?) that includes the food they can eat from the tremendous food selection.

You have quite a lot to correct. Please read my remarks and correct your work accordingly.
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Daphna