School uniforms

School uniforms have been around for decades. However, throughout the years this issue has raised many questions in regards to it's pros and cons.

When duscussing the issue of shcool uniform, one must first relate to the social agenda behind it. School uniforms are ment to disguise and social and economical differences, making everyone look alike. Also, on a personal level, the school uniform can save time in the morning, that would other wise be dedicated to thinking what to wear.

However, school uniforms can also restrict you and limit your personal and individual taste in clothes. Teens often need to express their individuality and making them wear a school uniform can undermine this. Furthemore, schools that wish to encourage their pupils to think independently cannot and should not force a dress code. Personal choise begins with how you choose to present yourself to the world, and when you have to cover it up with a uniform it is like wearing a mask or a disguise.

To conclude, the school uniform might be beneficial when it when it is designed for young children like those in grade school, but for pupils in high scool it causes more damage than good. In my opinion school uniforms should be restricted to grade school only.

Very good essay. Well done!
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Daphna

Burge McCall

Mr. McCall was a short, heavy - set man with a loud voice. He put a(מיותר) grease on his hair and prefume on his handkerchief. In addition, he had a habit of sucking his teeth with his tongue and making a peculiar sound(too many insignificant details). Mrs. McCall was a tall, thin woman with black hair and big black eyes. She always wore her hair parted in the middle and smoothed down on each side. No one knew why Mrs. McCall married Mr. McCall. Some said she married him to get away of the Santa Fe railroad engines.

The couple had a bad marrige in which Mr. McCall used to call his wife names and generaly be very stingy with her. Mrs. McCall, on the other hand, did not respond to his name calling that, in turn lead Mr. McCall to slap her across the face. This slap was the turning point of the plot. Mrs. McCall's reaction was calling her husband "a big rat", telling him he would regret it some day. Later on, Mrs. McCall acquired rat poison in order to kill "a big rat". After Sled the seller told Mr. McCall about his wife and the rat poison, Mr. McCall changed his behavior and started to be kind to his wife(Explain why).

In conclusion, these events lead to a happier relationship in which Mr. McCall only(מיותר) spoke nicely to her, taking(gr. - took) her to (the)movies and (to) picnics etc(מיותר). In my opinion, this relationship was strange from the beginning and very unclear. While reading the story I couldn't shake the feeling that something bad was going to happen but i was extremely surprised to read the ending. I believe Mrs. McCall was very smart and crafty by causing her husband to change his behavior with nothing more than an illusion(what illusion, please explain more clearly).

It's good, but some of your statements need further clarification.
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Daphna