My big sister

This is my second post in my new school blog and today I will talk about the most important person in my life.

The most important person in my life is my sister; Oshrat Monet.
Oshrat is my second big sister and she is two years older than me , so in fact I know her all my life and we know everything about each other. It's not a bad thing when you have a great big sister like mine, because Oshrat teaches me a lot of things and helps me in many things like homework and problems with my friends.

In about five months Oshrat will be recruited to the army and I'm really depressed about it because when it will happen(gr.) we won't spend our free time together but I'm sure we will find a solution to this problem.- divide this paragraph into 2 sentences. This sentence is too long.

And now, in a sharp twist, I will tell you a little bit about my sister. As I wrote before, Oshrat is my big sister and she is older than me in two years and a half , which means that she is 18 years old. She has brown eyes and a black hair.

Nowadays she is working in a coffee shop that is called "Coffee Coffee" and she wants to be a psychologist. As all my sisters, Oshrat also studied in the same elementary school and high school. In addition, she really likes animals, especially dogs and lions, because in our house we grew up in a way which we are supposed to love animals.(phr.- We were raised to love animals).

I have so many things to tell you about this wonderful sister but I can't because i have just 4 paragraphs and this is my last one. To sum up, the only thing I can say is: Take care of your family, because it's the best thing that could ever happened to us.


Meni, you have some work here. Please correct your work again.
Daphna.